“The Cosmos”……these are cinquains.

Cinquains are a form of poetry, with a couple of methods. Last year I wrote tons of them apparently, and they will come again in fashion on ERWA.

They always do….

COSMOS CINQUAINS Alternating Methods…I and II (Part I)

Universe
Infinite space!
Distance to distance
Overwhelming all the senses
Forever.

Virgo
Chained sweet maiden
Like Andromeda there
Infinite patience is her fate
Virgin.

Orion
Hunter’s stealth
Steals earth’s orbit
Canis Major barking loudly
Sirius.

Aries
Orion’s ram
Joins the hunter gladly
Orbits across the nighttime sky
Pursues!

Emptiness!
Vast galaxies!
Filled with stars
Still distance looms unending
Void.

Hunter
Orion’s quest
Emotion burning fire!
Chases Virgo through the Heavens
Captures!

Gravity
Heaviness bounded
Pulls both downwards
Sagittarius the Archer wounds
Falling.

Embrace
Luminous skin
Orion unsheathes cock
Virgo bleeds upon Hunter’s sword
Conquered.

Exploding
Supernova upward
Orion’s pleasure expanded
Virgo wilts, hymen pierced
Violated.

Black Hole
Emotion’s fire
Pleasure burned out quickly
Hurling Virgo into vastness
Disdained!

Janekohutbartels

copyrighted, 2008

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