I applied for membership to the Anglo-Japanese Tanka Society in York, England. I thought I would send two tanka to Mr. Hisashi Nakamura on the off chance that they would be accepted. They were.
I am grateful to the Society for publishing on their site my two tanka. Anyone who has read this blog for a while knows I am head over heels in love with the tanka form. I spend some days just counting syllables on my fingers while attempting other things!
I want to thank two writers, Berowne and Nick Nicholson for their unflagging encouragement and support of my attempts to write poetry. Both are excellent writers; Berowne has years of knowledge of poetry, of many, many kinds, and Nick is a very fine poet himself.
This influence (of the Tanka Society) can only mean I will be amongst poets and work that will strengthen my own attempts. Or so I hope it to be.
Lady Nyo
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Tanka
by
Jane Kohut-Bartels
The moon floats on wisps
Of clouds extending outward.
Tendrils of white fire
Burn up in the universe–
Gauzy ghosts of nothingness.
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Shooting star crosses
Upended bowl of blue night.
Imagination
Fires up with excited gaze!
A moment– and all is gone.
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Jane Kohut-Bartels
Copyrighted, 2010
Tags: Japanese poetry, tanka, The Anglo-Japanese Tanka Society
February 11, 2010 at 9:20 pm
Congratulations! You seem to have mastered the art of Tanka. Keep writing!
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February 11, 2010 at 9:58 pm
LOL! I don’t know about “mastered”….a little too soon for that….
But tanka you.
Lady Nyo
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