Still National Haiku Month. Maybe a haiku below…
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Pale crescent moon
Sky colored lavender
Nothing more to wish.
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And just because it’s Valentine’s Day, a day of love and devotion, I post something from the great 8th century Japanese document, the Man’yoshu. The top poem is from this document. The bottom poem is my own. It was common then to layer poems in this way, rather a ‘call’ and ‘answer’. (with a little revision)
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Thick and fast stream my thoughts of you
Like the layers
Of endlessly falling snow
Upon the cedars.
“Come to me at night, my woman.”
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Come to me
If only in my dreams
Where my head rests upon my arm
And not yours–
Let this veiled moon
Above and these dark, brooding pines below
Be witness to our love, my man.”
–
Lady Nyo
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POEM OF MY HUSBAND
“You’re all I have”
Heard in the dark
Heart almost stopping
In an inattentive breast.
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I dare not look at him
Too bald a sentiment
And too true to bear
A light, comforting answer.
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What would occasion such words,
Such a piteous sentiment?
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When one has lived
Within eadh others hours, days, years,
The fabric of its making
Can be frayed.
The warp and weave, the very thread
That appears as if out of air
(and it does)
becomes substantial.
It covers and clothes more than the body
and the life blood of sentiment,
Love-
Becomes the river within, unending,
Even transcending the pulse of life.
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“You’re all I have,”
A whispered refrain
Echoing in the heart
And burrowing deep.
–
Jane Kohut-Bartels
Copyrighted, 2013
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February 13, 2013 at 10:45 pm
Looking back, we have to be thankful for all we have. I have the most loving and caring wife and companion any man can ask for. Our love has grown deeper over the years. I’m honored to have her my Valentine. XOXOXXX
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February 13, 2013 at 11:31 pm
I could improve….like breakfast for you every morning. We are very blessed, Husband.
28 years and it has been such a delight. I wish for snow, so we could cuddle in bed and watch it come down…and you wouldn’t have to spring out of bed when it’s still so dark. Remember two years ago when we almost killed ourselves sledding down the streets?? LOL!
Happy Valentine’s Day, darling.
xoxox
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