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Ome is Plum in Japanese…as in Plum Tree.
Kami is a spirit, or demon…sort of.
Uguisu is one name for the Bush Warbler, or what stands in for the Nightingale.
Lady Nyo
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Lord Nyo’s Continuing Lament, Part 5
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Lord Nyo was known
For three things:
Archery,
Drink,
Temper.
He was attempting a fourth:
Poetry.
It wasn’t going well.
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Leaving orders not to be disturbed
(He would have only tea and rice)
The servants thought their master possessed:
Possessed by a demon!
Possessed by an uncaring kami.
Who didn’t know sake was
The life-blood of their master?
What was next?
Would he throw aside his two swords
And take the tonsure– become a monk?
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By the pale light of a moon
Too thin to fatten the road,
Lord Nyo applied himself
To brush and paper
His face a terrible scowl,
His tongue gripped between his teeth,
The air peppered with grunts and soft curses.
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The bullfrogs outside called to him.
He remembered this same effort
Decades ago when his Priest-tutor
Attempted to refine his calligraphy
When all he wanted was a sharp stick
To gig frogs. Ah!
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Through the night
Lady Nyo and her old nurse
Watched from across the hall,
Watched the candle flare up and die
As Lord Nyo burned each poem,
Knowing his words inelegant
Sensing his mind too dull to enflame
The love, forgiveness, passion of his wife.
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Towards dawn the cry of an uguisu
Pierced the dark,
Singing against the light
Of that watery moon,
The ‘poem-reading-bird’!
In a blossoming ome
Outside his window.
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Her song went deep,
Rendering him helpless,
Stilling his whirling head,
Refreshing his heart.
It was such a simple thing.
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Being of the world
He missed what was important.
Nature, in the form of a simple bird,
In the form of a tone-poem,
Was offering an answer:
A path to redemption
If only he would listen.
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Lord Nyo picked up his brush,
Stroked it across the stone
Into the puddle of watery ink,
And with his wrist bent properly,
Wrote this character:
(Emptiness, a void, forgetting the forms of the material world.)
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It was a start.
It was what the little bird sang:
Of emptiness, the void,
The return to his nature, to Nature,
That finer nature,
Before the grizzled warrior–
The void where hope was possible,
Where his life could begin.
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He slept that night
Listening to the frogs of his childhood
And the nightingale in the plum,
Both bathed in the watery moonlight.
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Jane Kohut-Bartels
Copyrighted, 2011, 2013
Tags: 17th century Japan, fiction, from "The Nightingale's Song, Jane Kohut-Bartels, Lady Nyo, Lord Nyo's Continuing Lament, Ome Tree, poetry, Samurai
August 2, 2013 at 5:55 pm
Just breathtaking Jane. This one is just wonderful–
“being of the world
He missed what was important”
“knowing his words inelegant,
Sensing his mind too dull to enflame”
Not a single wasted word here. Complete, lean, elegant, moving. Well done. love CS
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August 2, 2013 at 7:09 pm
Thank you, CS….for reading this poem and your commentary. I think when you study haiku, and tanka….it rubs off…sometimes. Poetry could also learn from writing ‘flashers’…200 word stories..not just scenes…but complete stories with beginning, middle, ending. Doing flashers, because you are limited to a certain word count (it can also be 100 words, which is harder) makes you mindful of what you are saying, writing…every word has to count in some way. No waste.
These poems get more involved, psychologically with the characters, and I hope they hold together. This series has been my favoirite to write and the problem is ending it. It does have an ending, but I didn’t want to quit! I grew to love this “ugly old warrior”. LOL!
Hugs!
Jane
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August 4, 2013 at 9:48 am
Archery, drink, temper, poetry. But you gotta love the guy for trying to write poetry to his delicate and lovely wife, no? xxx
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August 4, 2013 at 12:43 pm
Yep! He’s quite a character. But of course, at this time, and actually for centuries before, writing poetry was a signal that a man was refined…not just a weapon of war for his daimyo.Flower arranging, the tea service, etc. So….his attempts at this would be ‘normal’….though for an ‘ugly old warrior’, this is a pain in the nether region. It’s not so out of character, but he’s straining mightily to do so. Writing poetry was a mark of more than refinement, too. In a court situation, it could make or break a man.
Lord Nyo knows that he has blundered mightily with his wife, and he has come up lacking…so he is attempting something to express his love. We will see how it turns out. LOL!
Thank you, CS, for continuing to read these episodes. They warm up in the following.
xoxo Lady Nyo
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August 20, 2013 at 12:10 pm
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August 21, 2013 at 8:01 pm
Thank you.
Lady Nyo
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