“Frank”
(courtesy of pc.wallnet.com)
Dedicated to Sherry Marr whose compassionate nature and especially her love for animals stands as example for me.
Knew a woman
in a trailer park
in the scrub pines of Florida.
Poor as a church mouse,
half–crazed by life,
fed all strays-
pariah of the neighborhood.
Every evening flocks of vultures,
like fixed-wing aircraft,
skimmed the pines,
landed in a muddle of dusty feathers,
awkward, out of their element
and with a group waddle
came to the cat food offered in pans.
They were patient guests,
waited for the strays to finish.
There was decorum
amongst them,
these fierce looking birds.
Perhaps they sensed
the charity offered
humbled their nature,
perhaps they had reformed,
I don’t know.
“Frank” was their leader
who held back until
the others were done.
Frank would never face you,
he sat sideways
though I believe he peeked.
Perhaps he was ashamed
A Lord of the Sky
brought to this station,
filling his crop with kibble
from a dented metal pan.
Come sit with me.
Extend a feather,
I promise not to stare.
Your warty red neck,
your hang-dog countenance
does not disturb me.
Your feathers a faded black
on Earth,
but wheeling into the Sun,
how glorious your wings–
Feathers exploding in prisms
And diamonds from Soloman’s mines!
Come sit with me.
Let our talons dig into the sand
let the ocean cleanse our feathers.
I will call you friend, brother
for the gift of humility
brought in on your wings.
Jane Kohut-Bartels
Copyrighted, 2016 (an earlier form of “Turkey Vulture” was published in “Pitcher of Moon”, 2014, by Amazon.
some paintings of birds done by me.
Tags: "Turkey Vulture", compassion and humility, dversepoets.com, some paintings of birds
September 20, 2016 at 7:29 pm
Indeed, vultures do fulfill a useful function and as such, can only digest carrion and food like dog food. I liked this take on the prompt very much! For as I have observed. vultures are patient creatures and only take what is given to them, unlike greedy chickens/
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September 20, 2016 at 7:30 pm
I do like this.. there is something both revolting and majestic about vultures.. the way that they seem to be giving devotion to the things we hate… the food we have left… truly a cleaning crew. The discussion with that leader of the flock brought a smile to my face.
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September 20, 2016 at 7:33 pm
Jane, I just love this. I recently read in the magazine “Birds and Blooms” about turkey vultures and their importance to our planet. But I love how you have personified them, noting their politeness and their humility. This is pure delight.
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September 20, 2016 at 7:41 pm
Thank you, Victoria, but everything I wrote about them came from an observation of the ‘pariah’…who was a very battered woman in her earlier years. It left it’s scars. Frank actually exists and he’s a gentleman vulture. Thank you, Victoria. Vultures can’t smell well, which is very much a blessing!
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September 20, 2016 at 7:42 pm
I think Frank exemplifies the very best of us….vulture, scavenger though he be. And he really exists down in the scrub pines of Florida.
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September 20, 2016 at 7:42 pm
I didn’t think the turkey vultures would have waited for the cats to finish.
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September 20, 2016 at 7:43 pm
Scavengers is maybe the best a human can be… really caring not to waste.
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September 20, 2016 at 7:44 pm
Yep! I think vultures have a lot to teach us…about patience and many other things, probably. I love that Frank and his crew waited until the cats, raccoons and stray dogs finished first. They showed remarkable civility considering all these above would be their natural (dead) prey. Maybe they were just waiting…..
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September 20, 2016 at 7:45 pm
Yep….they live in Simplicity…and we could learn a lot from them.
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September 20, 2016 at 7:47 pm
Well, this flock did. But they had been feeding at these pans for about 3 years. They learned their place and patience, unlike a lot of people.
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September 20, 2016 at 7:52 pm
LOL, maybe.
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September 20, 2016 at 8:39 pm
This is awesome!
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September 20, 2016 at 8:53 pm
I think I’ve fallen in love with Frank the turkey vulture! I’d never heard of turkey vultures before. I will be looking them up for sure!
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September 20, 2016 at 9:20 pm
You delivered a wonderful gift in the words…
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September 20, 2016 at 9:40 pm
Thant you so much, ZQ.
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September 20, 2016 at 9:43 pm
Well, as you can see by the picture of Frank, they are not handsome birds. And their nose is blessedly weak. They are an important scavenger and farmers and yahoos should not shoot them. They do, you know…for ‘sport’. They clean up our highways, the woods and pastures. We should be grateful to Frank and his kind. Thank you for reading. I have fallen in love with Frank, too.
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September 20, 2016 at 9:43 pm
Thank you.
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September 20, 2016 at 10:28 pm
You paintings are gorgeous. And I LOVE the stanza on Frank. Oh, fallen Sky Lord. 😉
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September 20, 2016 at 11:02 pm
This is spectacular! What a story. I love the line: “There was decorum / amongst them”. I felt like I was standing there watching them all eat.
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September 21, 2016 at 12:07 am
so many things to love in your poem.. beautifully done.
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September 21, 2016 at 12:34 am
Thank you, thotpurge.
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September 21, 2016 at 12:36 am
Thank you, Linda. When another poet can feel that way about a poem, I think it is hitting its marks.
I think their collective behavior from what I gathered was rather civilized. We could learn from them I think.
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September 21, 2016 at 12:39 am
LOL! Yes, such a huge and magnificent bird to fall to eating cat kibble. And thank you. Most people who come to the blog never see the paintings. I don’t know why…but I appreciate when someone does notice. And the paintings figure in my forming of poetry. I was a painter long before I took up poetry. One glides into the other, and gives imagination a run. Thank you for noticing them.
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September 21, 2016 at 4:04 am
Totally enjoyed your tale of the humble vulture, Jane. I love the personality that you affixed to them and they do have that hang-dog look about them…and that waddle. I’ve seen many of them gathered in trees and they are a formidable sight!
Also, love your tribute to our friend, Sherry. I so admire her!
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September 21, 2016 at 4:04 am
P.S. I love, love, love your amazing art work…such talent!!
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September 21, 2016 at 1:57 pm
Thank you! I was a painter decades before I took up poetry, but I don’t think there are any Chinese walls between the two. One hopefully inspires the other. On good days. LOL!
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September 21, 2016 at 1:59 pm
Thank you, Bodhirose! I love all creatures….and I am supported in this sentiment by Sherry. She has an incredible heart…full of compassion for animals and against animal cruelty. I love her.
Vultures: they are an misunderstood species in my opinion. “Frank” embodies qualities I think we all can learn from. At least I can learn from.
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September 21, 2016 at 2:39 pm
What a surprise to read your words and find such nice thoughts about me. Thank you, Jane. You made me feel for that grizzled old buzzard. I love “extend a feather……I will call you friend, brother, for the gift of humility brought in on your wings.” So compassionate. He does sound like such a gentleman…..sigh. and your art work is so beautiful. Thank you, Jane.
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September 21, 2016 at 2:43 pm
You deserve more kudos, Sherry. You have set an example…a consistent example with your own poetry and your videos on your blog. I marvel at the depth of your compassion. Humanity could learn from your example. I hope you continue to ‘teach’ us out here about compassion for other species. Each time I go to your blog, I am blown away by what I find there. Sometimes, it’s not easy to read or see….but it is necessary for those of us who care deeply to be there. Thank you, dear friend….for what you are.
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September 21, 2016 at 4:22 pm
I am heartened to think I might be doing some small thing to increase compassion for animals. I feel if they can live it, I can bear witness, thanks, Jane.
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September 22, 2016 at 11:07 am
ah the turkey vulture — magnificent and truly ugly at the same time…and yet a creature of God. Your description here is wonderful — and the juxtapositioning of the woman, the turkey vultures, the bowl of kibbles……the piece slaps us with reality. Excellent write!
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September 22, 2016 at 11:34 am
Thank you, Lillian. She was a victim of domestic abuse. She sounded retarded when I first talked to her over the phone, and only later realized what had happened to her in her life. She was poor, on some sort of welfare, but she fed all these strays …cats, dogs, raccoons, other species, and the vultures. She fed them at the expense of her going hungry. That was the slap in the face for me. Her humility and compassion. Great lessons here that some would avoid. Including my own siblings. My brother, a pompous “Christian” called her family ‘white trash’. His own wife was a sister of this woman. So, what does that make her? I am so sick and tired of the brutal classism of people who are spoiled, rotten and lord it over others. So, this woman lived in a trailer. So what. She showed more Christianity in her behavior than my arrogant brother. Thank you, Lillian, for seeing the reality of the verse.
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September 22, 2016 at 5:28 pm
I love Sherry’s heart too, I agree with you there, Jane. Because Vultures are not the most attractive of animals, I’m sure that has something to do with people’s misconceptions…oh, and the fact that they subsist on carrion! I think we can learn something from all creatures.
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September 22, 2016 at 6:34 pm
Yep, they have a particular bacteria that allows them to digest extreme carrion. They are the street sweepers of the earth. No, they aren’t attractive in the face, but those gorgeous wing spans!
I know that I am not the first to appreciate Sherry’s heart and postings. She is a wonderful women. And hopefully, she will garner the time to write her memoir. She has a life time of stories and I love reading the few I have.
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September 22, 2016 at 6:57 pm
Yes, the wingspan is something. We have many here in Florida and it’s common to see them soaring overhead. I would love to read Sherry’s memoir; I hope she can get it written. xo
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September 22, 2016 at 7:22 pm
Me, too. She’s a marvelous writer!
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