To D’verse and other poetry sites that post my poetry: Just got this email from “Jingle”.
“not sure what you mean, we post and repost lots of stuff, information sharing.
when you post on wordpress or blogger, you do not have to pay and ask permission in person.
which is what we count for.
maybe one of your fellow posted your stuff, will not publish formally in books.”
Of course she would do this, trying to throw blame on others…but she’s a known liar so it doesn’t stick. Beware of Jingle, bluebird books, etc…because apparently these sites are all run by the same thief. I notice that she is avoiding the real complaint, that she took an already published poem of mine and ‘rewrote’ it. Made it garbage because she is still a thief and no poet.
Jane
Universe=
Infinite space!
Distance to distance
Overwhelming all the senses
Forever.
Virgo
Chained sweet maiden
Like Andromeda there
Infinite patience is her fate
Virgin.
Orion
Hunter’s stealth
Steals earth’s orbit
Canis Major barking loudly
Sirius.
Aries
Orion’s ram
Joins the hunter gladly
Orbits across the nighttime sky
Pursues!
Emptiness!
Vast galaxies!
Filled with stars
Still distance looms unending
Void.
Hunter
Orion’s quest
Emotion burning fire!
Chases Virgo through the Heavens
Captures!
Gravity
Heaviness bounded
Pulls both downwards
Sagittarius the Archer wounds
Falling.
Embrace
Luminous skin
Orion unsheathes cock
Virgo bleeds upon Hunter’s sword
Conquered.
Exploding
Supernova upward
Orion’s pleasure expanded
Virgo wilts, hymen pierced
Violated.
Black Hole
Emotion’s fire
Pleasure burned out quickly
Hurling Virgo into vastness
Disdained!
Jane Kohut-Bartels
Copyrighted, 2016
Tags: "Cosmos Cinquains", challenge...', d'versepoets pub, Warning about Jingle
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September 30, 2016 at 4:27 am
I love how you brought us into an adventure through space. Also how my thought associates with the last words to the next, like a thin thread of a necklace…
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September 30, 2016 at 7:09 am
I love the way you have explored the violence of the universe with your cosmos cinquains, Jane. I felt bad for poor Virgo, especially in the final two stanzas. When we look up at the stars it all appears to be so peaceful – how wrong!
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September 30, 2016 at 10:42 am
Oooh this is beautifully haunting! ❤️
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September 30, 2016 at 11:11 am
I like the breathless pace of the chase and the constellations consummating sending galaxies spinning through the void.
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September 30, 2016 at 1:37 pm
Thank you, Sanaa.
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September 30, 2016 at 1:38 pm
LOL! Yep, how wrong…all those gases and meteors whizzing by. Thanks, Kim.
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September 30, 2016 at 4:43 pm
Writing about the universe is overwhelming to me as well ~ Like how you focus on each element and part of the universe Jane ~
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September 30, 2016 at 6:57 pm
Thanks, Grace. Since I am having a hell of a time commenting on your blog…I will do it ! You showed me how to do it with your “leaves” verses. Beautiful, clean and lovely. Thanks, Grace…I spent the morning reading Stevens…..trying to get a clue.
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September 30, 2016 at 10:26 pm
I like the universe this creates.
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October 1, 2016 at 1:30 am
LOL! Pretty sexualized, I think. Thanks, Gizmo for reading and your comment. Wish it were so…this universe.
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October 2, 2016 at 12:18 am
I was swept up in the constellations, cosmos and galaxies! Spectacular perspective.
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October 2, 2016 at 12:26 am
Thank you, Mother Wintermoon. For reading and your lovely comment. Cheers!!!
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