
Merry Christmas!
The morning brought a first snow,
And with it wind over the mountain.
I watched snow turn to ice,
Invisible sleet hit the panes a’ hissin’.
Soon a crystal coat on tender branches—
Ghostly hands pulling to earth,
Anchoring them fast.
I depend upon the silence
Creating a space to remember,
Solitude, too, now to be shared
Only with haunts,
Or perhaps a cat or two.
Inside the comfort of crackling wood,
Well seasoned with last year’s split,
The sweet, sharp tang of pine and oak,
The groan of a log shifting its failing weight.
I remember your boot kicking it back off the hearth,
Sparks flaring upward,
Stars enfolded by a blazing sun.
Outside the pelting sting on windows,
The howl of winter racing round eaves
Looking for attic-access between clapboards,
A hambone skeleton dance to
Shake its palsied bones warm.
Soon fading light at twilight
Suspends the day=
A cocoon of white, unfocused mystery.
The night brings a muffled benediction
Over the land,
And memory is put aside for the morrow.
=
Jane Kohut-Bartels
Copyrighted, 2010, “First Snow” originally published in “White Cranes of Heaven”, 2011, Lulu.com
This poem got some needed revisions by me this morning
Tags: "First Snow", "White Cranes of Heaven", lulu.com, poetry
December 6, 2016 at 4:46 pm
Wonderful poem Jane, very vivid image of Winter as we have it here now xxx
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December 6, 2016 at 8:12 pm
Hi Xenia….first thank you for reading and your comment. We don’t have snow yet….just a month ago it was very warm here…not a great Fall…but Friday it will be around 24…and with all this rain (though it’s supposed to clear out tomorrow…) I am hoping for something of snow…flakes, sleet. etc. Something to make it seem more like a proper winter! But you have snow and I am so envious!!!
Hugs!
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December 6, 2016 at 8:19 pm
After a cold few weeks the snow has been rained away and we are having very mild weather here too for the next few days, around 14C. Sending hugs 💖
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December 6, 2016 at 8:25 pm
I’ll take those hugs and raise you five!~
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December 6, 2016 at 8:27 pm
🙋💖
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