I can still hear the music
Coming over the valley,
A glissando of silver sound
My father’s French horn
All phantoms now,
The adagio of Mahler’s Fifth-
Heartbreaking, haunting dreams,
The allegro of a Mozart something,
What I never knew
But quickening the heart.
The Aurora Borealis
Dipped her chariot too low
And a glissading curtain
Of celestial green
Ribboned the ink black sky.
My father saluted
With a cadenza of Wagner
And a Music of the Spheres,
Drawn out in lyrical passages
golden tones linked together
Floated to those green ribbons,
A celestial duet-
With the Cosmos on one side
And a determined humanity on the other.
I can still hear the music
Coming over that valley
A haunting horn fading away
The man, too,
Both the essence of phantoms now
Into the territory of dreams.
Adagio tones
Float upon gossamer air
Birds go back to sleep
–
Jane Kohut-Bartels
Copyrighted, 2016
Tags: Aurora Borealis, d'versepoets pub, French Horn, my father
December 7, 2016 at 10:16 pm
Oh my. This is lovely, haunting…I can see where you obtained your love of music. I do like how you equated the Aurora Borealis with your father’s passing and his music.
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December 7, 2016 at 10:19 pm
It actually happened in rural NJ back in the early 60’s. It was amazing and I can close my eyes and see it up in the night sky. My father’s horn was omnipresent, and he wrote out music on the back of the old plank pantry. And the first lines of his mother’s favorite hymn. Thank you, Toni…it was a quick one.
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December 8, 2016 at 12:58 am
Oh my gosh, how beautiful this is. You have a way of writing that gives the imagery so much light making it fully alive. What an experience to be immersed in this music in the home environment. All the great composers and such melody all around.
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December 8, 2016 at 2:25 am
Such praise from an excellent writer as you are, Helene. Thank you so much! It was good and bad, because we were all musicians…I violin (really bad) and voice, brothers were instrumentalists. A lot of competition there,…and it goes on today….in our 60’s. Yikes. Both brothers are amazing musicians…but my father was the best of all of us. He played as a teenager, second horn under Toscanini. People asked him what it was like? He said he was too scared to lift his head. LOL~!
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December 8, 2016 at 6:48 pm
This is so beautiful Jane, I especially love the image of your father and the aurora in a celestial duet :o) xxx
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December 8, 2016 at 9:10 pm
My dear father took every advantage to ‘sound the horn’. I became to appreciate horn players. French horn players carry their lips home in a bucket. LOL! It’s a devilish instrument. He played from the time he was 14, and had one of the best teachers in the NE. Not because he could pay…he couldn’t, but the teacher (can’t remember his name now) was so impressed with his ability. I miss his music floating over the fields, and the long dead neighbors in rural New Jersey do, too. They listened for his notes especially during Xmas. There is something eerie and spectacular about a horn from the distance. Of course my mother followed him with a spittoon around the house. Those things collect spit fast. He cut the first knuckle of his left hand off in an accident, so he built up the valve. LOL! Nothing stopped him playing that horn(s) He had several in different keys.
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December 8, 2016 at 9:13 pm
A perfect blend of prompt & poetics–a heartfelt musical romp through several chamber(pieces) of the heart; appreciated the haiku/senryu as closer. I tend to do that a lot too.
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December 8, 2016 at 9:24 pm
Ah! “Chamber pieces of the heart”! Marvelous, Glenn. thank you. The haiku is becoming a coda for me. LOL!
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December 8, 2016 at 10:05 pm
It sounds absolutely amazing. Do you have any recordings of him playing?
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December 8, 2016 at 10:20 pm
This is so wonderful, Jane. I love the poetic qualities of your imagery and words…isn’t glissando just delicious?!
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December 8, 2016 at 11:06 pm
Breathtaking. Goodness.
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December 9, 2016 at 12:53 am
thank you! I’ll be around tomorrow morning. Pooped here. we are having 24 degree temps and have to prepare the house and woodstove to survive tonight. But! Winter is certainly here!
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December 9, 2016 at 12:54 am
Thank you, Victoria. glissando is a wonderful word. I’ll make the rounds tomorrow morning. Thank you, again. And for this wonderful prompt!
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December 9, 2016 at 12:57 am
Hah. He was very young, but gave a concert in the local Mennonite church. He nailed it…at about 7 years old. A piece of Mozart and one of his own compositions. The only thing I have is a piece of staff paper where he wrote down this ABA piece. I have nothing else.
Funny, two years later…he was in a recital and a pretty little Korean girl was ahead of him. He just lost it in mid Mozart. LOL! Lesson: never play AFTER the pretty little Korean girl. LOL!
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December 9, 2016 at 9:16 am
I so much love this one.. a wonderful bittersweet music memory. The connection between the music and nature is so strong. I can see this being sung or recited to gentle music and the sound of a brook…
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December 9, 2016 at 12:48 pm
Wonderful! :o) xxx
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December 9, 2016 at 1:32 pm
I’ve finally got around to reading and I’m so glad I made sure I had plenty of time – there is some stonking poetry gong on here and yours is no exception, Jane! You’ve woven musical terms and autobiographical stories tightly and beautifully together. I can hear that ‘glissando of silver sound’ and the ‘adagio of Mahler’s Fifth- /
Heartbreaking, haunting dreams’. I also hear melodies that quicken the heart; I know the composer but have no idea what they are called! The image you paint of the Aurora Borealis is gorgeous, which is repeated in ‘golden tones linked together /
Floated to those green ribbons, / A celestial duet’. But most of all, your love for your father shines through.
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December 9, 2016 at 1:45 pm
Thank you, Kim…..what a lovely review of this short poem. He was a complex, complicated man….who died November 5th, 1989….at 75. Way too young. But he was the parent I do know who always loved me. I am also a musician… but a bad instrumentalist. I went to Westminster Choir College, but it was the 60’s and life was so much more interesting outside the classroom. I was a vocalist and didn’t really use my training until 1990. LOL! Then I got a wonderful accompanist and did a couple of concerts for almost 10 years. We did a lot of Strauss/Brahms/Samuel Barber. But I had a young child who would sit under these grand pianos in practice…and I was afraid for his hearing. He survived…my voice didn’t.
Thank you, again, Kim. Music started the poetry for me…and I bet many others here.
Hugs!
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December 9, 2016 at 1:46 pm
Thank you, Xenia!
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December 9, 2016 at 1:49 pm
Oh! Lovely, Bjorn! Yes, music and nature was always connected with his playing…and with him. He also was a long distance runner…marathoner. A complex and complicated man, but loved, loved, loved by many and all animals. He used to bring home stray and broken cats and dogs….fixed them, fed them, and found homes for them. Easier in the rural countryside back then. Hadn’t considered the possibilities of this being a ‘song’ but I see what you are saying. thank you, Bjorn…for your very gentle review.
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December 9, 2016 at 2:07 pm
Hugs back!
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December 9, 2016 at 3:22 pm
Not only is your poem a song of tribute/ recognition/ honour, to the father you once had but a still life painting of a moment that you describe so hauntingly well. Spectacular.
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December 9, 2016 at 4:07 pm
Paul…that is such a lovely comment. I remember that one incident (central NJ) where the Aurora Borealis dipped so low….into our latitude…and never to be seen again. Truly a magical night with its color and my father’s music. Thank you, Paul.
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December 9, 2016 at 4:09 pm
As I said…you painted a picture.
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December 12, 2016 at 5:18 pm
I am so late to the reading….apologies. Was at my daughter’s for the long weekend and enjoyed carovting with my grandchildren!
Loving this beautiful response to the prompt. I especially love the haiku at the end….so sensitive, such beauty in your words. And I love the repeated refrain, “I can still hear the music
Coming over that valley” It ties the piece together, completes the song.
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December 12, 2016 at 7:49 pm
Thank you, Lillian…I guess because the prompt was music….it’s inevitable that a repeated refrain would appear. Some times that is the best way to tie a poem together, as you say…completes the song. Thank you, Lillian!
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