Over at dversepoets the prompt is the word ‘heart’ included in a poem.
Lady Nyo
“Musings on a Closing Day”
I move my chair
to observe Mt. Fuji-
monstrous perfection
topped with the cooling crust
of spring snows.
Languid movement
of a branch,
like a geisha
unfurling her arm
from a gray kimono,
makes petals fall,
a scented, pink snow
covering my upturned face
with careless kisses.
Timid winds caress
my limbs,
a fleeting relief
to tired bones
brittle now with
the sullen defeat of life.
Raked sand of garden
waves barely disturbed
by feet like two gray stones
as grains flow
round ankles.
I realize once again
I am no obstacle to
the sands of time.
My heart is quieted
by the passage of nothing
for in this nothing
is revealed the fullness of life.
Jane Kohut-Bartels
Copyrighted, 2016 “Musings on a Closing Day” published in the new second edition of “A Seasoning of Lust”, Amazon.com, December, 2016
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February 11, 2017 at 10:58 pm
Absolutely beautiful poetry 🙂 I can particularly relate to the snow moon as I’ve been enjoying it wax all week (covered by clouds last night). So many beautiful words throughout your post, but two favorites are ‘snow beams falling to earth’ and ‘Earth glazed by frosted diamonds’.
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February 11, 2017 at 11:34 pm
Thank you, Janice!~ I was feeling guilty, because I composed this at the post! LOL! Little thought into this poem, but the Snow Moon was so beautiful. Felt I should take a stab at it. Thank you, Janice. I deeply appreciate your comment.
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February 12, 2017 at 6:03 am
Well they do so that sometimes the best writing is what you write down spontaneously 🙂
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February 12, 2017 at 8:48 am
I agree….but that hasn’t happened for a while for me. LOL!
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February 15, 2017 at 7:31 pm
Absolutely love this – especially the second and last stanzas!
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February 15, 2017 at 7:44 pm
This is lovely… the images of the snow and the geisha, but most of all the closing.. the nothing. I feel very much like this is the most important thing, like the pauses overwhelms the word…
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February 15, 2017 at 8:40 pm
Thank you, Bjorn! This poem is contemplative….something I don’t allow myself much to do. I need to do more of this….and write more of this. Thank you so much for reading, understanding and your lovely comment. it gives me pause….
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February 15, 2017 at 8:42 pm
Thank you, Lillian…for reading and your lovely comment. I like that last stanza, too. I guess the essence of the poem? Or message?
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February 15, 2017 at 11:38 pm
I liked the lines “I am no obstacle to
the sands of time”.
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February 16, 2017 at 1:31 am
I’m thankful Frank, you could find a few lines in this poem to like.
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February 16, 2017 at 9:03 am
Oh, this is so beautiful. It has created such a lovely image in my head. Absolutely love this 🙂
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February 16, 2017 at 10:21 am
Thank you, NJ! Thank you for reading and your lovely comment. We work for those images, and when they happen in the heads of readers, that’s a good sign! LOL! Thank you again.
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February 16, 2017 at 10:48 am
Haha, so true.
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