
Second half of vandalized mural
About three years ago, a muralist came into our community, and on a bare wall, painted the most difficult and original, high artistic endeavor I have ever seen. He ws French, and his “Artist’s statement” was painted in French, and few could read it. So they painted over the mural. I would agree that this mural called for discussion as to what it ‘meant’. It was beautiful, inspiring, confusing. But the ‘leadership’ of this particular community decided to vote their own ignorance. Tant pis.
“Snakes in the ‘Hood”
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“When people see a snake, they think serpent.
When they think serpent, they see Satan”
….former State Rep. Douglas Dean, who was arrested for cocaine.
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Oh, my dear garden snakes,
Run and hide in the leaf litter!
You appear each spring
Birthed from that old stump,
Your beautiful duns, browns, moss greens
Intermingling with last year’s fallen leaves.
I remember you as divine jewelry
Around slender wrists as a child.
You terrified the adults
And transformed me into Cleopatra.
A box under my bed
Disturbed by a dust mop,
A dozen of you slithered out
The 200 year old wood floors,
Cold on your bellies.
The head of the mop screamed–
I never could find you all.
Did you disappear out that window
Where you dropped to the ground?
I mourned for those missing,
Learned adults didn’t care
For the miracles of nature.
Eating blackberries from
A stretch of rambling bushes,
A July North Carolina sun
Warm for the mountains
And below me,
A cottonmouth doing the same.
Backing out of fear and respect,
But the blackberries were good
And enough for both to share.
I remember the black racers
Hanging in the pine trees
And kids daring
To run under them,
Hoping one of us get squeezed
In embracing coils
But it never happened.
You knew our game.
In cultures you snakes
Were the umbilical cord
Joining all humans to Mother Earth.
In ancient Crete
You were the guardians
Of the Goddess’ great mysteries
Of birth and regeneration.
The Hopi Indians
Joined the snake of the Sky Spirit
With the snake of the Earth
And dancing in reverence,
Loosened them into the fields
Where golden corn was growing
To secure their fertility.
No garden hoe will touch you,
My dear little garden snakes,
No stoning of your innocence.
I will gather your twine-ing bodies
And lift you above the ignorance of bigotry.
They violate their God’s dictates
“Even to the lesser of you amongst us”
And you without limbs or voice
are surely that.
If not beloved by God,
Surely,
You will be beloved by me.
Jane Kohut-Bartels
Copyrighted, 2017, (“Snakes in the Hood” is published in “Pitcher of Moon”, 2015, Amazon.com)
Tags: "Snakes in the Hood", bigotry, controverial poem., French muralist, ignorance, mrualist, poetry, Poets United Poetry Pantry for today
August 20, 2017 at 5:47 pm
I have the same feelings about snakes. We had a baby black racer in the laundry room for a couple of weeks – it crawled in through the vent space. I left it alone. It is gone now and I kind of miss it.
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August 20, 2017 at 5:51 pm
Please post this on Poets United Poetry Pantry today. I like it! It’s different.
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August 20, 2017 at 6:01 pm
Ok, and thank you!
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August 20, 2017 at 6:03 pm
Yeah. I like raccoons too, and we have opossums every year. Most times tragic times because of the damn dogs. The neighborhood had a wild turkey (one), a raccoon that raided all the gardens but we tolerated it because he was so huge and beautiful…..a coyote and a couple of foxes. And snakes, sometimes copperheads.
Thanks, Toni.
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August 20, 2017 at 6:22 pm
I admire your compassion, but I must say I prefer to read about most animals than to have person encounters
Have a blessed Sunday
Much love…
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August 20, 2017 at 6:54 pm
We do have all these animals we dislike… but snakes are not among them… beautiful creatures (but you should be careful with them…) If it had been ticks I might have reacted differently.
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August 20, 2017 at 7:05 pm
Ticks. LOL! And you would be right to do so.
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August 20, 2017 at 7:36 pm
Snakes should be revered….they are mistrusted and maligned, but oh so important to the balance of life in nature and my garden….we love them, but my neighbors scream in terror. Love your homage to these mighty creatures!
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August 20, 2017 at 8:41 pm
Well done! That was very thoughtful in the harmony.
ZQ
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August 20, 2017 at 9:06 pm
Thank you, ZQ. Poetry is never that far from music.
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August 20, 2017 at 9:09 pm
Thank you, Donna. I find baby snakes in the mouths of my cats….and we attempt to liberate them.
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August 20, 2017 at 10:10 pm
This is very lovely. Kudos for being a voice for snakes – and a protector of them. The lines about learning as a child that adults didnt care for the natural world hit home…..we are experiencing the results of that now. As is Mother Earth. Lovely to see you in the Pantry, kiddo.Have been very busy, we must catch up.
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August 20, 2017 at 11:07 pm
Not many snakes near me. Haven’t seen one in years…but if it would be one it would be a garden snake, nothing to fear. I greatly enjoyed your reflection.
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August 20, 2017 at 11:35 pm
🙂
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August 20, 2017 at 11:52 pm
Yeppers. Loved this even more on the second reading. Snakes and frogs and turtles are so important to our ecology. I encourage them. Now raccoons…….
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August 20, 2017 at 11:53 pm
Yeah, racoons, but they are so pretty….and look intelligent.
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August 20, 2017 at 11:55 pm
Thank you, Mary. Here in the South, we have copperheads, racers, cotton mouths and rattler. I’ve only seen these varmints up north, where I come from…rural NJ.
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August 20, 2017 at 11:58 pm
Hi Sherry! So good to ‘talk’ with you. the summer here has been hot. 94 today, but Sept. is looming and that brings hope. The garden I left to fate: the mosquitoes are heavy this season. I have gone through so many bottles of spray stuff. I am a walking DEET factory. Although many times painful, it’s a fertile field to reach back into memories of childhood and write from there. Thank you , kSherry….this is my first time in years at PU. Nice site.
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August 21, 2017 at 12:18 am
they are nasty mean citified baby bears. I throw rocks at the one that comes and tips over our garbage can every night
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August 21, 2017 at 12:53 am
Well, if it wasn’t for the possible rabies, I wouldhave a few around as pets. There were a few that would get into our boot closet back in NJ. How I never knew as the walls in this cooling room were 2 feet thick of stone. the house next door until last week had a mother and two kits at an attic window. They were lovely. Don’t throw stones at them, Kanzen. You know….karma.
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August 21, 2017 at 2:42 am
LOL…I don’t believe in karma. I truly don’t. And it is only one. every once in awhile it snarls at me. we have a mutual dislike society. Yes, they are like a lot of men – they are pretty and they look intelligent…LOL
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August 21, 2017 at 3:13 am
I’m not going to argue with you there. LOL!
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August 21, 2017 at 4:20 am
We were taught to be scared of snakes in our childhood as snakes abounded where I lived. My viewpoint changed a 360 degree after watching Steve Irwin (The Crocodile Hunter) in Nat Geo, when I was already an adult. And now this poem! I can feel the heartbeat of this beautiful poem. Thanks for the post.
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August 21, 2017 at 5:16 am
And thank YOU for reading this poem. I am delighted you have. I remember watching him on tv…and how it opened our lives to so many animals we would never face. I am afraid of snakes as an adult, have lost so much innocence from childhood, and other things, so being able to write our memories and our ‘better selves’ in poetry is a boon.
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August 21, 2017 at 6:04 am
A very touching poem. Thank you for defending the snakes!
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August 21, 2017 at 6:20 am
You are very welcome, Rosemary.
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August 21, 2017 at 5:38 pm
I adore the jewelry of garden snakes!
“I remember you as divine jewelry
Around slender wrists as a child.”
Just when the ode gathered all that I love and gave it back to the snake, you brought in history too. I am certain the snakes are grateful.
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August 21, 2017 at 6:13 pm
Thank you. I am hoping the readers of this poem are grateful too for the history lesson.
Thank you for reading and your comment.
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