Moon dec 30, 2017

(taken tonight, December 30th, 2017, looking East)

 

The full moon above

floats on blackened velvet sea-

poet’s perfection!

But who does not yearn for a

crescent in lavender sky?

Jane Kohut-Bartels

Copyrighted, 2017

(“Moon” originally appeared in “A Seasoning of Lust”, 2sd edition,  2016, Amazon.com)

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  1. Frank J. Tassone Says:

    Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
    #Haiku Happenings #10: Jane’s latest #tanka!

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  2. ladynyo Says:

    Thank you, Frank. Not sure that it really is a tanka….a formal one, but it works for me. Thanks@!!

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Frank J. Tassone Says:

    My pleasure, Jane! As informal as it is, it was tanka enough for me! Happy New year!

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  4. ladynyo Says:

    me. too. Frank. I used to be a Nazi on tanka form, but now? not so much. There are so many rules with tanka but if it’s nice free verse, it’s nice free verse. LOL! Happy New Year!

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  5. sunmoonstar13 Says:

    A beautiful poem (and photo) to close out the year. Lovely!

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  6. ladynyo Says:

    Thank you, Nick. I can’t do what you can do with a camera, and that was just a phone camera but it worked for the poem. Happy New Year, my dearest friend! Love and Lots of Hugs for the New Year. xoxox

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