“The Kimono” to be published soon.

The days are long,
longer still the nights.
The nightingale sings
to herself.

Above is some of the poetry in “The Kimono”. The book has gone to Proof Copy, with 340 words and 60 chapters. Whee.

It took 12 years to write and there are times I didn’t look at it for months. Maybe a year. But those 12 years propelled me into a deep study of Japanese literature and poetry forms and that was enlightening.

There’s a lot of my poetry in there, as I learned tanka and haiku.

Nick Nicholson, a friend and collaborator came in towards the middle of the book. He was reading the book and where I had ended it on Chapter 30, he wanted me to continue the story. I didn’t think I could and this led to a massive fight which isn’t unusual for us. LOL! But he was deeply involved in the storyline and didn’t want it to end. So I kept writing and after 30 more chapters it was finally finished. And Nick was right. It’s much better as a story with the extension.

Nick sent me the final proof yesterday and I have to read (again) those 60 chapters. But knowing that it’s completed is the charm.

We probably will get it out on Amazon.com by October or perhaps a bit earlier. Nick has formatted and produced 4 of my books in the last few years. Without him, this book probably would be still in manuscript form and never have seen the light of day. Nick also designed the cover.


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Jane Kohut-Bartels
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4 Responses to ““The Kimono” to be published soon.”

  1. Frank Hubeny Says:

    Congratulations on your new book!

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  2. ladynyo Says:

    Thank you, Frank! Should be on Amazon.com by October. I’m not rushing it, but Nick would like to see it there tomorrow! LOL!

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  3. sunmoonstar13 Says:

    Dear readers!

    Please do not believe that Jane and I had a “massive fight”! As I recall, I merely used my skills of civilised and persuasive argument to convince her that the initial draft of the novel felt incomplete and needed to be extended in order to provide a more satisfying conclusion. Fortunately, Jane saw the wisdom in my suggestion, undertook the task of writing the additional chapters, and now, more than 12 months later, the publication of this wonderful and exciting novel is imminent!

    It has been a pleasure working with you, Jane, in editing and designing “The Kimono”. My best wishes to you for the success of your first published novel!

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  4. ladynyo Says:

    ROTF!!!! Yes, you pushed me to continue “The Kimono” when I (mistakenly) thought it was finished at 30 chapters. Thirty more chapters and it WAS completed. These are the fruits of working with a superior intelligence (his) and the novel is definitely better for it. An d I am exhausted and probably missing some (more) synapse.

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