A Tanka….

Shooting star crosses

Upended bowl of blue night


Fires up with excited gaze!

A moment– and all is gone.

-Jane Kohut-Bartels

Copyrighted, 2021

One Response to “A Tanka….”

  1. ladynyo Says:

    Thank you, both Peter and Frank! I love the form of tanka, and will have a section in my new (unpublished right now…) book: “Comfort Food”…..along with haibun and haiku! Thank you Peter and Frank for reading this tanka.


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