Last fall, I was introduced to the haibun form by Kanzen Sakura, who has become a hearty friend. Kanzen is deep into Japanese culture and had been there numerous times. I have other friends who write Haibun, like friend and fellow poet in California, Steve Isaaks. But I never was very interested in the form, until some nudges by Kanzen.
Haibun is probably the oldest recorded writings in Japan. They basically were travel notes and from these sketches in the trail, came beautiful haiku and tanka. Basho was one who wrote in haibun.
They are marvelous small forms, to be written as a few sentences and ending with a haiku that relates to the memory. Here are a few of my own. Plus a tanka.
Lady Nyo

(Sumo puppies in training…)
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Sumo
I love Sumo wrestling. Or at least I think I do. Perhaps it is the only sport where I don’t feel like I have to hold in my stomach sitting there. Watching those mountains of flesh-men grapple with each other makes my heart beat hard. There is such history around this sport, and such a deep tradition. The fact that they gorge themselves with a purpose makes my heart sing. How wonderful that you can eat and eat without any concern for weight or fashion!
And, did you know that those belts they wear can cost a million yen? Or so I have read. I have also read that Sumo Wrestlers are some of the most humble and gentle of men. Here, have another bowl of rice.
Mountains of flesh pound
A ring of sandy earth
Cunning and strength vie.
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Shadows
The newborn radishes are shadowed by cherry tomatoes. The almost-red globes drop down to visit. They compare hues. The garden is bathed in the light of a horizontal crescent moon, grinning like an idiot, suspended over trees that cast shadows on hillocks and deepening the valleys with their creeping darkness.
It is very early Spring. Dusk and day still balance in a pale sky, though the moon has risen. Oh, the mystery of the night where shadows churn with imagination!
I sit on a concrete wall, watching distant clouds dance on the wind. The oaks are feathery with their foliage, the pecans still winter-nude. Day is closing. Doves are almost silent, sleepy sounding. Bats speed by, scimitars of the night. I close my eyes and drink in the approaching dark. Only those shadows attend me, and possibly a few lurking monsters.
Night’s benediction:
Bull frogs bellow in the pond
Shadows blanket day.
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(This is a general warning against Kappa. And also a good example of something to fear.)
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Fear
Global Warming has brought significant changes to the South, and Atlanta is now nicknamed “Tornado Alley”. In the almost fifty years I have lived here, I have seen disturbing changes. My first acquaintance with a ‘tornado’ was when I heard what I thought was a tornado and I was in the bathtub. My now-ex-husband headed for the basement leaving me in the water. It turned out to be a train. There was a track back in the woods we didn’t know of.
One flattened our local park and was called ‘severe wind shear’. From the looks of it, it seemed like a tornado. Trees, hundred year old oaks flattened to the ground, an indeterminate path through the park, a warzone of defeated greenery.
I fear the heavy winds and rainstorms. I am powerless before them. The only way to save oneself is to head for the basement and cower with whatever lives down there. And of course this adds to the fear.
Winds begins to rise
Fear out runs common sense
The worms are safer
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I wander the fields
Snow covers the barren soil
Sharp wind plays pan pipes
A murder of crows huddle
Black laughing fruit hang from limbs
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Jane Kohut-Bartels
Copyrighted, 2017
J
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