“Metamorphosis III”

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     “Mine, mine, mine”

(fruit bat drinking orange juice.com)


Now a widow, Laura’s life took on different dimensions. The house was on the market, and she decided to travel. She thought of spelunking, exploring caves, climbing mountains.

Pouring over brochures, she heard a scratching sound. She unlatched the second story window and allowed Bart Batkowski to flutter in.

“I wish you would use the door like a normal person. You will draw attention this way.”

“Laura, do you forget what I am? Besides a co-conspirator in murder?”

Laura signed. Harold was dead, gone, Bart now sharing her bed. But it wasn’t the bed where the action happened. It was the damn closet and sex was gymnastic at best. Though Laura had known a transformation, it wasn’t complete. The angle of penetration was off. Bart would insist on hanging from his heels, and all attempts at necking gave Laura a stiff one; neck, that is.

Since Bart said his DNA required the closet hang, they compromised with a vertical 69 position. Bart would embrace her with his wings wrapped tightly around them, and Laura would get comfortable with her pubis level at Bart’s nose.

It was a strange mating, but when Bart snored it sent Laura to heaven.


Jane Kohut-Bartels

Copyrighted, 2010-2017

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6 Responses to ““Metamorphosis III””

  1. Brian Says:

    The setting, trying to visualize the setting, gave me a good chuckle. Love the picture.


  2. Just Barry Says:

    Should I search for the prequels? Intriguing twists here. 🙂


  3. ladynyo Says:

    Hi Barry! If you scroll back a few days, you will see both episodes already posted….1 and 2. Thanks for reading, it gets funny later on. My one attempt at horror and I fall to slapstick. LOOL!

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  4. ladynyo Says:

    Hi Brian…..thought this would be right up your alley. A bit later it falls totally to comedy. Gorean comedy, slap and tickle stuff. Thanks for reading!


  5. Just Barry Says:

    I dunno… can’t get much more horrifying than 69ing a fruit bat. 😉

    I’ll have to dig through your crates for the rest of the story. It was compelling to read.


  6. ladynyo Says:

    Fruit bats…they are cute little creatures, and better to have around than vampire bats. I remember when my son was very young, he brought a baby (I am supposing) bat to me when I was in the bath tub. LOL! It peeked out from his hand and all I could think of was rabies and he would drop it into my bath water. LOL!

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