ORPHEUS and EURYDICE
Hear my rendering of an oft-told tale
(mixed with a leavening of Bullfinch)
Composed in view of Orpheus’
Lyre up in the Cosmos.
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Orpheus, son of Apollo and Calliope
(I forget Eurydice’s heritage)
Was to be blessed by Hymen.
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Sadly, he brought no happy omens.
His torch smoked, drew tears.
Flowers wilted,
Gods and Goddesses coughed and sputtered.
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Orpheus, master of the lyre,
Whose notes melted tiger’s hearts
Made trees uproot and creep near,
Rocks to soften,
Loved his Eurydice.
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Fate conspired with happiness.
Eurydice, chased by Aristaeus
Was raped.
She died a broken, bloody death
On the end of Aristaeus’…. sword.
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How fast Orpheus descended those Stygian depths!
His tones pleading for the return of Eurydice.
Sisyphus sat on his rock to listen,
Ixion’s wheel stood still
The Furies eyes now wet with tears.
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Eurydice came,
Garbed in her winding shroud,
fresh with young death.
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Here’s the deal. Walk out of Hell
And don’t look back.
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Orpheus! You almost made it!
Eurydice, twice dead, disappears.
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Sometimes
In both love and death-
It only takes one glance.
–
Jane Kohut-Bartels
Copyrighted, 2013
Tags: Bullfinch, Classical Mythology, dversepoets.com, Jane Kohut-Bartels, Orpheus and Eurydice, poetry, The Underworld in Mythology
November 26, 2013 at 8:24 pm
“Sometimes
In both love and death-
It only takes one glance.” so true… beautiful as always Jane.
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November 26, 2013 at 8:38 pm
Hi Laura! Thank you for reading and your lovely comment.
I tried last week to get to your blog, but my computer wouldn’t follow through. This week, I was try anew.
How is the quilt going? I am so honored to be included in this. And I was grateful to you for doing it again this year. Beautiful, Laura…but then I would expect that of you.
Love, Jane
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November 26, 2013 at 8:49 pm
we did it 201 as of this moment… thanks for asking dear Jane. Enjoy that pie:-)
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November 26, 2013 at 9:03 pm
I took a mythology class in high school & I’ve been fascinated ever since. There’s just something about learning important life lessons from those who came before us.
“Sometimes
In both love and death-
It only takes one glance”
What a way to end a poem!
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November 26, 2013 at 9:47 pm
very nice retelling in verse jane…
great close as well…and one look will surely make all the difference in love and death…ha…nice correllation between those two eh? smiles.
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November 26, 2013 at 11:49 pm
Oh, wow. It’s a sad story but you tell it so beautifully I couldn’t look away. Love that last stanza.
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November 26, 2013 at 11:52 pm
Oh, wow! You’ve packed it all in here, Jane. The blending of myths culminating in that finale is most effective.
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November 27, 2013 at 12:57 am
Beautiful poem, Jane. Happy Thanksgiving .
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November 27, 2013 at 1:45 am
Thank you, ayala….happy thanksgiving to you!
Hugs,
Jane
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November 27, 2013 at 1:48 am
Thank you, Victoria….I did a few a couple of years ago, and they were a bit too erotic to post here, but what the hell.
I did compose a few that were Wagnerian in theme, but I couldn’t carry over the myths, and they fell to the comic. LOL!
Thank you, Victoria and for your encouraging comment.
Jane
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November 27, 2013 at 1:57 am
Thank you, Nara. I’m still not sure what that last line means…LOL!
Jane
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November 27, 2013 at 2:01 am
Hi Brian….thank you for reading. One glance….well, I am still pondering over what that means and it’s application in life.
I find that elements so different together on the page can sometimes bring just by inference, something philosophic. Hopefully.
Thank you.
Jane
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November 27, 2013 at 2:05 am
Thank you, Alex. I came to mythology rather later in life, and I wish I had found it earlier. We all grow up with certain cultural myths, but the Greeks hold a foundational place in our mythology, I think.
Bullfinch, Hamilton, all these earlier writers wrote from a deep seated knowledge of the myths. I believe they were….in many cases, to be moral lessons. Lessons for life and conduct.
Even if they are imaginary beings, we could do worse.
Thank you for reading and your encouraging comment.
Jane
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November 27, 2013 at 3:59 pm
One glance … reminded me of the story of Lot’s wife in the book of Genesis. One glance back at Sodom and she was turned into a pillar of salt.
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November 27, 2013 at 4:34 pm
Hi Tony, in mythology and I guess the Bible…well, they draw on each other. This ‘one glance’ is prevelent in Japanese literature as well.
Thanks for reading.
Jane
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November 28, 2013 at 11:38 am
Love this poem. It reminded me of one line from the Don Henley song “Boys of Summer”–‘don’t look back you can never go back”
This is one of the most tragic and painful stories in mythology, for me. A double loss. “fresh with young death”–what a gorgeous line.
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November 28, 2013 at 1:40 pm
LOL! Oh, You are so funny! Yep, I know that song….LOL!
Thank you for reading, CS, and your comment. And a special Happy Thanksgiving from our house!
Love, Jane
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